‘Compose two descriptions [one positive, one negative] of places with people congregating. Write a commentary explaining your use of lexis, metaphor, POV and syntax.’ [‘A*’-grading, 2000/2001]

'Compose two descriptions [one positive, one negative] of places with people congregating. Write a commentary explaining your use of lexis, metaphor, POV and syntax.' ['A*'-grading, 2000/2001]

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I work as a Supervisor in the Sterile Services Department of Treliske Hospital, Cornwall. I enjoy jogging, Duolingo, and supporting Arsenal FC.