‘Compose two descriptions [one positive, one negative] of places with people congregating. Write a commentary explaining your use of lexis, metaphor, POV and syntax.’ – IMAGE THREE

An image of the third marked page of Chris Larham's descriptive writing essay and commentary ['A*'-grading, 2000/2001].

Positive and Negative Descriptive Writing Essay and Commentary [‘A*’-grading, 2000/2001]: Image Three.

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