‘Compose two descriptions [one positive, one negative] of places with people congregating. Write a commentary explaining your use of lexis, metaphor, POV and syntax.’ – IMAGE ONE
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Positive and Negative Descriptive Writing Essay and Commentary [‘A*’-grading, 2000/2001]: Image One.
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